Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-24
Such a simple things apples and yogurt . The memory of something shared even something so ordinary is painful.
I really loved this .
Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-24
This stupid site grrrrrrrr didn't let me finish my comment
I just lost everything I was going to say :]
anyway loved the poem it made me smile . Good work lol
Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-24
It made me smile. It's funny how things we shared with a loved one, some so simple will remind us of that person at the most inopportune times. Well done.
Black Heart Still Beating ( F P )
at 2009-09-24
OH MY GOODNESS this is cute!!!
Loveee it, it helps ppl understand that sumthing so simple and unappresiated like apples and yogurt can be WONDERFUL.!
**bri..
P.S HEHE
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-26
Jeff
Memories can be great and make us laugh.
Good job!
Take care
Cindy
Alexlaxenne
at 2009-09-30
Hahaha.. thats really funny.. good job with the rhymes.. 5/5
thnx
Devina
Andrew
at 2009-10-01
Lol
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