Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-14
Brings back memories of childhood, knowing for sure there was a monster in the room, hiding just waiting to grab me. Afraid to get out of bed and go to Mom's room for fear I would be grabbed. Well done and welcome back, Gabe.
The Bonnie Lass ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-14
Hey Gabriel:)
It is so nice to see you posting again, son!
The poem is so cute, ha ha.
see them when the closets ajar,
you know they're real. They are! They are!
^^^
This showed so much imagination on your part and especially the "the are! , they are! "did it for me, ha ha.
Welcome back!
God bless:)
5/5 Ingrid
Princess Fiona ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-14
This was so cute. I remember hiding under my covers after watching The Wizard of Oz hehe I just knew that witch was coming to get me :]
Just a adorable poem
*+*+*
Melody
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-14
Lol. what a lovely write. It is very reminiscent of our thoughts when we were children. Hmmm sometimes mine now.
Great write with a great flow. Awesome!
Take Care,
Kay
Quiet Insanity ( F C D )
at 2009-10-14
Really cute write. I think you should put it into For Kids. It's perfect, great rhyme never missed a beat in the flow.
Simply poem yet incredible. Well done
Le Prince de Monte Cristo ( F P C )
at 2009-10-14
You made me smile and brought me back 55 years ago. I liked your style very much. 5/5
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-10-14
Just a delightful poem. I look forward to reading many more .
Sourav ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-15
Lovely write! I liked the free flowing nature of this poem. Well written!
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-16
HaHa.... this poem is so true to every mind of a child! I loved it from start to finish. It really made me smile... and brought back memories! Specially the closet door ajar! I'ill not tell you how long into my teenage years that fear still haunted me :) heHe. Very well done written indeed!
Anthony M ( F P )
at 2009-10-16
Fun and easy to read, rhymes in a fluid manner and each line carries the preceding line smoothly. Nice write.
Countess of Monte Cristo ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-17
There's something about your poems. they're short, fun to read, they seem like a movie, except manifested in words instead. i'm a fan already.
5/5
Branwyn ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-19
Congrats, son, well deserved win:)
You came back with a bang!
God bless:)
Ingrid
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-19
Congrats Gab! :]
You made my week by coming back, it was a total surprise, what a nice way to start off after being gone for a few months. Keep these winner poems coming!!
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-19
Congrats on the win hun :) Very cute poem. I enjoyed the read. Nik
Genuine Lavender ( F C D )
at 2009-10-21
Congratulations.
I rarely read funny poems but you did a fine job here, I think so many of us can relate at certain age to those panic attacks, would they be aliens ????
Nicely penned.
Take care
naomi
at 2009-10-25
I would change
Think I'll just stay in bed,
pull the covers over my head.
To
Think I'll just stay in the bed,
and pull the covers over my head.
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