Comments

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-16

Gabe
With all that happening to your bike. I guess walking was the only choice..LOL
Take care
Cindy

Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-16

Gabe, you make sense. (smiles) A touch of humor but a touch of something else as well. Well done.

DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-16

A good write! .... made me smile :) I thought the "looking for what was" was remembering younger days... and the places you used to go on your bike. But I might be wrong! Lol... An enjoyable read :)

Princess Fiona ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-16

Gabe you still know how to make me smile. The flow was excellent. I missed your work.

Quiet Insanity ( F C D ) at 2009-10-16

I think I have had a few of those days as a kid. LOL
Your rhyme and flow was done with ease it seems. Your poems are light and happy. You remind me of Mark Twain

Countess of Monte Cristo ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-17

Lol. loved this, Gabe. 5/5

Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-19

You made me smile. Very humorous indeed.

Le Prince de Monte Cristo ( F P C ) at 2009-10-21

I hope you have comfortable shoes, boy,

Cherimari2 at 2009-10-24

Hi...this was a fun read. You have a talent for this...I look forward to more!

Hugs...
Mari