Comments : Who likes bugs?

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "When I gazed in my beer, sure enough a happy critter was doing the backstroke there." - this had me in stitches ken - everyone can relate to this piece.
    All the best and I hope you are well,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by J Nair

    Hahaha Ken, really ?
    They hide under the rug, they bite you in the rear without a care, and without a hug!
    Ken would you really like them to hug you :) ?
    and the backstroke was a genius ,
    i was actually able to see the animated critter waving out , *< in between his backstroke..
    fun reading this one.

    Thank you Ken.

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thank you both, I always like to add some humor in many of my poems but with this one I went for the whole magila. Hey J I don't like to hug bugs but they do love to hug me! For me, spiders are creepy scary guys, why would one not be afraid of them with their eight blue eyes? Another true fear is when that bug does their swan dive into your beer or when the skeeta buzzes in your ear!
    Regards, Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Your poem had me laughing Ken, it is so funny!
    (or maybe not if they are sharing YOUR steak with you. lol!)

    Well written, and I enjoyed your poem!
    We can all relate to this I think!

    • 8 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Peter, glad I made you laugh, it is also good for your digestion.

      Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This in deed is a change to read something that will make you laugh and smile. Once in a while a good laughter is the best medicine. I really like how you have written this too. A story told without loosing its message with clear pictures and laughter...good one!

    Hope your aunt recovers soon...

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Meena!