Comments : Marital Bliss (tanka)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes indeed, Larry. One for the married men out there - all nodding along knowingly, no doubt! Excellent.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Larry, your poem had me in stitches.
    So true! Liked this short write!

    • 8 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thanks, Ben & Peter.

      I always say my first wife trained me for my second one.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Larry,

    Marital Bliss is when my lady quietly sleeps! Lol

    Seriously though as Ben says many men will relate to this. In the quiet patience there is respectful love and understanding.

    Take care

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    ...and from a woman's point of view...that is so very much appreciated! We hardly know where the time goes and we buy something and come out we say"wow I took a long time!" :)

    Understanding and Trust are the two key factors for a lasting marriage..oh and Communication too!

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congratulations on your win.
    Take care Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Well done Larry. Your patience has paid off in a nice gold badge!

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats Sir on the Win :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yup, this man has understood the message! ;0)

    Congrats on the win, Larry!

    Well done,

    Ingrid