Hahahahaha i loved it, this was great. :D very cute and well down, goshh now i want some ha.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

This waS such a cute poem. i havent tried to write a funny one yet. but i liked this 5/5

Wow, this was such a funny poem =]
It was absolutely amazing.
Great job!
5/5

*Cindy*

YumYum. It makes me want to go out and eat me some strawberry shortcake! I loved the imagery and how the food makes you feel. It was beautiful. It was refreshing to read something different and all in all it just made me smile. Well done *5/5*

Haha that was cute. i've never seen a poem like that, i can honestly say. great job.

Haha..wow makes me hungry
for some cake. Lol although it was
a funny poem it stil was really well
written :)
5/5
<3tay