Bad Boys, Good Girls

by Hrodwyn

Bad boys, bad boys
What are you going to do
When they come for you

Run, run, run
Make it fun
With a bottle of rum
Yum yum yum

Bad boys, bad boys
What are you going to do
When they come for you

The good girls are in town
Now you will go down
Round and round
You will be found

Bad boys, good girls
Its time to have fun
With each one


Run run run
Make it fun
With a bottle of rum
Yum yum yum

Bad boys, bad boys
What are going to do
When they come for you

 

Submission date : 2011-09-19

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kelwin ( F P C D ) at 2011-09-21

Love it

Sherry Washburn at 2011-10-02

Hello, I just joined the site this morning, I read your poem it all seemed to flow along until I got to the line
bad boys good girls,
wanna have fun
with each one ?
I'm not sure if your working in a certain type of format but my suggestion for the line with each one would be to maybe change it to
with everyone
or with each and everyone
like this

bad boys good girls,
wanna have fun
with each and everyone.
that would flow smoother and make more sense, hope my suggestion dosen't offend you.

ty for sharing your work with me your poet friend SpoiledWrott10 =)