CHOCOLATE (Acrostic)

by Romantic Lover   Mar 21, 2007


Certainly one of my desires
How I desperately need to acquire
Oh, I can almost smell you
Can almost taste you too
Oh with you what I could do
Let me take you in and splurge
As I satisfy my tongue's urge
Temptations of pleasure
Enjoying my sweet treasure.

Just something silly.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really love acrostic poems! I believe you pulled this one off nicely. Choc! Yum. I liked this. It was silly but entertaining and cute all at the same time. A nice flow and a good rhyme. Well done. 5/5
    ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This was cute. Extra kudos to you for making this form rhyme. Good job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ahahahahahaha, this made me giggle.
    I loved this, it was refreshing and unique and made for a nice read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Something silly but mighty funny, lmao
    You do know that you've made me want chocolate now and i'm that mad about it, i keep a secret stash in my room, lmao
    Well done on this, very cute!
    5/5
    *gem*