This is another wonderful poem. You hit the nail right on the head. Life is contradict-able, but yet it's wonderful. I loved the concept of this poem and the imagery. The flow was also fabulous. This poem proves how very talented you are. You took a simple topic and turned it into something beautiful. I had no problems with this poem. The only suggestion I could possibly give is for you to format it a little better; other than that, I wouldn't change a thing. Keep writing Hun!

Letty