This was really well done the flow was played out very well and your choice of words were careful but meaningful. A great choice all around. The softness of the whole poem was very well done I would never expect nothing less the great 5 from you and you have shined brightly. Please read Justifide Affection

Careful Robert, this is starting to get public..... Silly man...

I am not a poet that despises the word "I" because it is when you give of yourself and not of your possessions that you truly give. You have not forgotten what goes up must come down. And so all we may do is to share

I love this poem and can relate

Thank
you for sharing

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Absolutely lovely piece of poetry!

Excellent diction, and I loved the subject matter you used to symbolize. Brilliant.

I wish I had time to expand on what I like about it, but I'm short on time so this will have to do - I loved it. 5/5, definitely.

I hope to read more of your work soon - when I have more time!

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