I ADORE this!!

the title, "Fighting Boredom" suggested to me at first that this poem would sound like a frustrated teenager screaming into her pillow about all the wrongs in her life, but instead you really surprised me! It contains the famous X-factor that really made me sit back and let the words ring in my head and really made me think about my life and how it's gone so far. I wanted to go out on adventures and such and experience things in a whole new perspective.

This poem also worked extremely well as a song, it had a beat to it when I read it in my head so I picked up my guitar and had a go at it.

Beautiful poem, Claire! Amazing!

Its wow, live and fight the bordom i say go forth and cnquour it all!

I really like how you chose not to rhyme i think its a cool style to write poems overall it was pretty good just try to flow a little bit more
any ways thanx for the comment
xoHSxo