First off, I love love loveeee your idea of this poem. It totally caught my eye. The Holocaust was one of the biggest things you'll ever hear about in history..! Intriguing subject! I knew this poem would be interesting. :]

"I'm writing for all of the people whose words were the one and only thing they owned;
--the ones who will not be remembered for nothing of them had been carved into stone.""

-Awesome job. But, you go on, and you don't continue with the "I'm writing for all the people.... you say.. "the ones...." and then you go on, it didn't throw me off too much or anything.. but it was the only line in the poem that didn't start like the others. i know it was kind of difficult starting it the other way, but idk. just a thought. possibly, you'll consider changing that, if not.. fine with me. it's your poem. :]

"I'm writing for all of the people whose names are forgotten as days roll along;
I'm writing for all of the people who did so much right but was told they did wrong."
-Sooo sooo true. Of course we don't really remember those who were invovled in the holocaust and how terribly they were treated.Nobody thinks about these things very much anymore unless they are taught in school or something. I know for a fact, that I didn't really "remember" those who were involved in the Holocaust til I was taught about it in school several years in a row.

This poem gave me goosebumps. I don't know why. But, it made me think about how brave those were who died in the Holocaust. It was such a big time in our history, and It'll never be forgotten.

Extremely amazing poem here. I enjoyed every speck of it. It was greatt! 5/5

I think this is an excellent and poignant poem. well done for writing such a beautiful, meaningful piece on such a difficult subject.
when reading it, i thought it could be applied to more than just holocaust victims and just all those who have died because as you imply, everyone will be forgotten.
this poem made me think and i loved how you structured as two seperate parts
excellent

Hello Stephen

What an excellent write. A poem for the underdog, almost.
So many people suffer and are forgotten. So many achieve so much and are selfishly forgotten.
I love the way the poem transfers from you telling the reader why you are writing it to a lesson and a pointing out that we, too, should be thinking of all those lost souls, past and future and write for them and with purpose.

Great write - well done.

Ben

Wow.. love this!

WOW Stephen, this is really powerful! It's so important to remember the nameless souls who don't have a voice anymore, and the ones that walk amongst us today.Beautifully stated, well done.