Never imagined anything so wonderfully could be written for number 13... whether lucky or unlucky ... the number 13 has always been a part of our life ... as you described ...

"13 is a number that all human share
The 13 major joints in our body
13 lunar cycles in a solar year
And the moon travels 13 degrees across the sky everyday"

^^ thats very informative ... knowledge weaved along with rhyme ...

beautifully done :)

I'm not the brightest crayon in the box and this is one of those poems where I read a line and have to stop and think on it and then say, ok, I get it and then move on.

What a great job molding everything together!!

Kelleyana,

What a uniquelty penned verse!
I am so surprised and I learned things from it, so thank you. With the boy of thirteen, you are talking about the Bar Mitzwa aren't you?
Nice poem, Kel..really nice!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Wonderful

This poem is very wonderful... Probably no one who consider this number unlucky once they read this masterpiece... Kudos!

Regards,
Bhavin

Kel it is totally crazy man...Seriously for me this the best from you that i have read so far. You absolutely blow my mind with how creatvely filp twist and reverse the numbers...I seriously wouldn't have though of writing a poem base on numbers but u have certainly pull this off.You have taken poetry to an all new heights.

Excellent Job

Wow u know i actually learn sumthing in this poem. it's prettie kool i like how u wrote.

Since things became a mystery we tend
Not to go beyond our senses
13 is a number that all human share
The 13 major joints in our body
13 lunar cycles in a solar year
And the moon travels 13 degrees across the sky everyday
Making things works in a mysterious way

this is my favorita part idky it just stand out to me. u did n awesome job here. keep it up!!
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Dear Kelleyana,

With this amazing poem, I'm sure that many people will change their mind about this number (13). After it's always represented FAIR (Room Number 13 ;((( , now it will take another turn toward Optimism... ^_^

Well done 5/5

Regards,
Urs truly,
Shokry Al-Qubati

I meant 2say FEAR ^_*

I never thought of it that way

lucky indeed

Good work i liked it

Interesting write, I enjoyed the read. It's funny how some say 13 is a bad number or how friday the 13th is supersitious. It just so happens that 13 is one of my lucky numbers and friday the 13th is one of my luckiest days unlike many others. Overall a wonderful write which I enjoyed. I would have liked to see some more punctuation however since it adds to the overall flow.

Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

This poem was unlike anything I've ever read.
i liked how you used your knowledge and expressed it in this form.
i enjoyed reading this
well done
5/5
-->Jess<--

Again let me be a bit humoristic
Since I'm in love with mathematics
For those who calculates well,
Come let me play with your head

*This part was my favorite. I really liked how you wrote this. The tone was so playful and relaxed. I like the imagery and the metaphors you used as well. I think you did a good job with the style and the flow was different but effective for what you were saying. I also like the idea of the whole poem too. Very creative. Keep it up. Nik*

Wow well I definitly learned a lot from this poem. I liked how informative it was. It was a fresh new spin on a poem. Although I felt it might have been a tad too much to take in, it was good none the less. Please keep writing like this you will not only learn but so will your readers. 5/5

"Ends with a 3 that reminds me of the trinity
A belief that kept within
All good things comes in double,
You're not alone just behind 1
Together you became 13 an age in certain
Tradition when a boy became a man"

Overall your message was beautifully put especially the metaphors, but these lines really stuck the most to me. It's like writing the journey of a youngling reaching adulthood. 5/5