Bhavin,

You did so well, I only changed a few things in this poem. It's a beauty and I would never have guessed that you are not a Christian:)
Beautiful dedication to our Savior, hats off dear friend!

Smiling He suffered and died for Mankind

^^^
So true, so sad:/

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Bugs, you've done a wonderful job with this poem. You are talented. Keep on writing, 5/5, kel.

I think this speaks for all the people. And it religion does not matter. Yes, all He did for us. To save us from sins. Very clear and free flowing poem. I loved it! Well done! :)

CORRECTION: And religion does not matter.
'It' was a typo!
Anyway, you did a very good work! Very significant poem indeed!