Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
The Holocaust must indeed never be forgotten, Kay...6 million people died for reasons too absurd to even mention.
Yet, we still haven't learned and doubt if we ever will..what to think of what went down in Iraqi prisons, and the way prisoners of war were treated in Guantanamo bay..the list is still endless...
Good job, I hope I still have a vote left.
God bless:)
5/5 Ingrid
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
Kay this is really powerful. An event that we should never forget and never forget all those millions who died and the survivors that remain. Excellent and I do have a vote left.
Edward D Zurovec ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
Truly mind boggling the Atrocities Man is
capable of.Truly amazing that we can heal and overcome such Trauma. WE must never forget, History repeats itself, and is being set up now for a Rerun. Peace and Blessings
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
This is just a small part of history that blows my mind. How man could be so cruel to man is beyond understanding.
I loved your poem not only for the excellent job of writing but for the stark remembrance of such a horrible time
Beautiful Chaos ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-22
One of my favorite times to read about Kay, so tragic, yet inspirational in the same moment. I think you have done a wonderful job here from description to flow, so i can't really off any criticism, only praise.
A truly enjoyable piece that tugs on the heart strings, nice job!
Corinne ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-24
Excellent work, Kay. Such strong writing, and a powerful expression of man's inhumanity to man.
Paul Hirst ( F P C )
at 2009-10-26
WOW Kay, thats so so sad, im ashamed to be human sometimes, x P
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Each verse is strong with emotions, where
pain & memories never seem to ease..its a
very, very sad write of truth..take care.
nightsan ( F C D )
at 2009-10-27
Awts... a powerful poem. i dont know the history of it. but it's tell to me how tragedy happend...
and it makes me think what happend in 1943..
good job and 5/5
Moussa Ag
at 2009-11-02
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Quiet Insanity ( F C D )
at 2009-11-02
Wtg Somehow I missed commenting on this but did read it a couple times. I knew it was a winners. Congrats dear lady
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
This was absolutely outstanding.. sad but definatly a winner and one of the best poems Ive read in a few months. Congrats on the win. Well deserved!
billy rob ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
"Survivor
is what I am called, but am not.
Every waking memory
cursed by explicit images,
graphic, but factual,
in all its gory detail.
I want to tell others....
not in order to trespass their thoughts,
as mine are haunted.
We will have died in vain
if you refuse to see."
You write of mans inhumanity with the dignity the victims deserve. History is full of senseless genocide, whether it be against jew, muslim, christians, or those whose skintones are different. Sometimes, I wonder which is worst..the hearts of people that do these horrible things or our hearts for letting them. Your poem moved me deeply. A very well done from me..well worth the win. Billy Rob
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
What a wonderful poem Kay. Very well written and deserving of the win....Congrats!
Love Cindy
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
Congrats Kay, much deserved win indeed.
Very sad event to talk about but you wrote with so much grace.
Few days back only i was watching everything in details (Discovery channel) and couldnt stop my tears.
Congrats once again for the win
all the best and take care
Ashurii Rayne ( F P C )
at 2009-11-04
An amazing write. Gave me the goosebumps! You have a unique skill here, and you should be proud. You took a subject most ppl wouldn't think of writing about, and you made it work so well.
it's etched in every crevice of
my yesterdays, my todays,
your tomorrows.
Those were my favorite lines. Brilliant use of words. This was a powerful write, keep up the great work!
-Ashlei
GrammaConcept ( F P C )
at 2009-11-04
And so it begins...
Forgiveness: Giving up all hope of a better past..
Always the question:...Can we forgive ourselves?
You have dramatically and effectively delivered here.
william mae ( F P C )
at 2009-11-12
Beautifully written poem, the sadness in it is that it is true, the lack of compassion in humanity is startling to say the least. your talent to write shines like a light in every write I read.
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