Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-26
Hi Paul:)
Very well written, loved the split up in four-lined stanzas.
There are times when I feel that i'm all alone,
he would touch my heart making his presence known.
Taking away the sadness and, lifting me up high,
and wipe away the tears that fall from my eyes.
^^
Indeed the love we feel for Him can lift us up way high and give us the strength to make something of our lives..He is like a silent hand that is in our backs, pushing us on:)
Thank you for sharing, my friend..it was a pleasure reading you!
God bless,
5/5 Ingrid
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Another wonderful poem full of praise for God and sharing your beliefs and feelings with us. Thank you and as always, Amen to your words.
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-28
I think your poems should be a mandatory read for those of us that struggle daily. There is so much inspiration in each one making the reader stop and think about all you've said.
Brilliant write
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-29
I loved this. Especially these two lines...
"He holds my life in his powerful and caring hands,
and by him the rest of my life is well planned."
How true these words are. Lol. Your poem touched my heart. It is truely a poem of love and praise... to a great God and Saviour. Outstanding .
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