jasmineAkAMrzRoss ( P )
at 2009-10-31
Great poem.i think your right, ppl somtimes dont see the light in their lives because they're focused on the bad...
Caroline
at 2009-10-31
Wow, its amazing :)
Very true and descriptive.
Great word choice. Its beautiful!
5/5
Caroline
at 2009-10-31
Wow, its amazing :)
Very true and descriptive.
Great word choice. Its beautiful!
5/5
Deana ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
You paint a very accurate picture of society, always searching for that purpose that will bring some kind of validation to this journey.....An excellent write! One that must be read and reread to get the full content! very well done!
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
Like the masses traveling a path of dark mystery
Many crave to find the light in their murky history,
Wandering about aimlessly in the shroud of shadows
Trapped without purpose in reality's gloomy meadow.
I enjoyed the whole poem but this stanza grabbed me right off. I liked the tone and theme of this poem. Done with intelligence and conviction
5/5
Kristina ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-01
This poem is very deep and that's what I like most about it. You did a great job writing it and expressed yourself very well. 5/5
~Kristina
MERCY is never shown ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
I like the way you use your words to show such great imagery its really good and kinda makes people think about how they are themselves great job
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