John Peterson ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
So very true..I think all of us could learn from this and just live the life we were given...Loved it!!
Chelsey ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
This is a great piece of encouragement about living life to the fullest...True true, we never know when we'll be gone. So many people choose to live horrible lives and it blows me away because life is just so short, why not make the best of it!
I thought your syllable count was off a bit which kind of throws me when I was reading it, but still the message you send was a good one! I enjoyed!
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