Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
Bitter memories will make us cry when we least expect them too. It just takes one thing to job the memory and bring back those times. Well done.
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
Souray I can't tell you how much I liked this poem. So emotional and touching. Memories are not always our friends, they bring such sorrow.
I have been waiting for a new poem from you and this was so worth it
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
A touching write... that you have so wonderfully penned. The sadness in your poem can be felt. Those bitter tears...
An excellent poem from you Sourav. Well done.
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
I agree with the people above :) this was a very emotional piece and well worth the read. I like the flow of it and the simple way it rhymes. I think you did a wonderful job with this and I'm glad I read it. Nik
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
Sourav,
This is listed under life...but it is so sad...
I loved the wording, so poetic and somehow so resigned.
No matter what you do- how much you try
Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry.
^^
I know exactly what you mean by this, I too am hounted by horrors of my past.
A much beautiful poem, you should be proud of:)
God bless,
5/5 Ingrid
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
I can't seem to pick a favourite verse or line
because from start to finish each line is
crafted so beautifully with heartfelt words..
liked the read :)
Mysterious Charmer ( F C )
at 2009-11-06
Memories are just like a double-edged sword. Some can empower and comfort you, while others can pierce your heart. You have truly chosen your words wisely, for they do indeed pierce the heart. A masterful piece!
Take care,
Mysterious Charmer
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
Three simple and yet so deep stanzas. Awesome write friend, loved everything about it. So easy to drown in your words.
all the best and take care
EvanescentMoon ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-08
This was a beautiful, lovely yet filled with profound sadness and at the same time revealed such anguish.another excellent piece form you..
Kiko ( F C )
at 2009-11-09
"A dying candle with its last desperate light"
What a wonderfully descriptive line. This poem is very sad and beautifully penned. Well done!
Antidote To Love ( F P C )
at 2009-11-09
" Suddenly a bitter feeling will make you cry "
great line .... only few can understand the real meaning of this poem....
superb.....
5/5
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