Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-02
Another poem that you have a great basis for. Great idea with so much truth woven into each word. The talent is there just a few edit touches and you will go far :]
yakari gabriel
at 2009-11-02
Thank you :D..Whoooho. Youre poems are amazing as well I'm gonna add you to favorites :D
AshleyMarie ( F P C )
at 2009-11-03
That's so true, we've kind of being talking about that idea in my Writers Craft class. Great idea, really well written too :)
AshleyMarie ( F P C )
at 2009-11-03
And I definitely meant kind of BEEN talking about that idea not BEING. Whoops. :)
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