John Peterson ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
Very emotionally touching! Awesome
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
I agree with John, very uplifting and it never hurts ot have a reminder that God loves us and we are indeed his vessel. Well done.
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-03
Olwin it was inspiring and touching. I really loved each word of it. We need to read these type to keep on track and keep spirits up when things get tough.
Love ya sista
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
This is truly beautiful, sweet, heartfelt and
flowed so very smoothly making this read a
joy..loved it!
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
Olwin,
There would be absolutely fitting under inspirational. This is truly the read that I needed this morning. You have worded this perfectly and it is very uplifting. Through all of our trials and tribulations we only need to remind ourselves that he will help us through it. I absolutely adored this. Wonderful write.
Dixiedaisy ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-04
I am sorry I started writing one thing and changed it to another. In the above comment I meant This would be absolutely fitting under inspirational, and now I see you have moved it there. Beautiful write m'dear. Absolutely encouraging and uplifting. You just don't know how much people need comfort sometimes and that your words will strike them and make them feel at ease.
Take Care,
Kay
Em ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-06
This is a truly wonderful piece written for our saviour. Well done, loved the flow, the rhyme and the words you used. 5/5, Em
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-07
Really nicely written, we should always remember that God will always love us, and at times just knowing that helps us through so much.
End Of Eternity ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-11
Beautiful write. Loved everything about it. Poem with such meaningful theme gives hope and trust me thats all we need in today's life. Great piece :)
all the best and take care
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