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Genuine Lavender ( F C D ) at 2009-11-08

Another dazzling piece from you, Miren... I'm so glad I come across this well done job.

I don't like to assume, but I think it's a smart perspective for peace and war woven into very elegant metaphors...

The strict syllable count to make the lines neat and handle the flow?...I don't think it's a specific poetry form...
All in all, it is very admirable job and more than enjoyable.

Take care

Luna Blue ( F C D ) at 2009-11-13

Good work on the strict syllable count. I don't think I would ever be able to pen such a beautiful piece with such a restricting structure. Cleverly done.
Heh, I feel sorry for always babbling around when it comes to commenting on one of your poems. ;)

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