Comments : I want to fly

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Walah
    A beautiful place to be :)

    I want to fly to the world of dreams,
    Where everything is precisely what it seems.
    Take me there and please forget me forever more,
    For i have far much in me i'd like to explore.

    I would love to fly to this dream world with you. Love the imagery.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very thoughful poemmm
    //Where everything is what it seems.
    No hypocritical appearances, no sweetened lies,
    ^^
    ohh even i wish there was a world like that...

    Myself awaits my own arrival there in anticipation,
    I still have much in me to explore.
    ^^
    these are really well penned... loved the thought process here...

    beautiful write...

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I feel sorry for people who do not have an imagination for it is that imagination that allows us to go places, do things we never in reality would get to do. Well done.