Comments - Disembarkation of turmoil

Xanthe ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-31

Wow. It's very inspiring. I agree, we should always be ready, because in the distant future something is always waiting for us. Great read 5/5


Maple Tree ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-31

Ohhhhh Mercy Luce-
you have a way of tossing me into a beautiful river of intoxicating words.....sighs... i drowned with inspiration on this piece-

"then be prepare to drink
even the last drop of water
from the oceanic glass
of your own desperation"

mercy girl you can write!!!!

Ruby Red Memories ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-31

Loved it! You sure know how to write. I cannot fault you at all 5/5

Lebanese Phoenix ( F C D ) at 2012-03-31

I really like the end, Luce.. so wise from you, again. I believe you are good in philosophy !! :)

Lioness ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-01

Awesome metaphors in this poem hun and the images are so vivid as well. I can really see everything that you are writing and also can feel it too!

I love the whole idea of your poem about change in life and going through it emotionally.



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