But for so long it's easy to pretend
that's what most of us do. Nice piece.

Thankyou :)

I like this one a lot, it reminded me of a song called "fear of a blank planet" by porcupine tree, and thats not a bad thing. over all i like the message, it was easy to relate to because everyone grows up and experiences many if not necessarily all of these things. i think it was definitely general enough that most readers can relate to it, but specific enough that they will take something away from it. well written indeed.