Nice ending to a clever write, there is great attention to detail in this and I love the whole atmosphere of this.

nice write

Thanks for returning the favour Po whet

you have written so much yet have little or no comments.
I hope some of my favourite authors see this and take a look at your work

he can be found here http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=474118

This is an excellent poem overall. The imagery you provide is stunning and the lines flow very well together. The whole scene seems to be about a war in the heavens. Meaning stars, planets or anything like that. But since you named it star wars I'll go with that. For me I believe stars could be angel eyes looking down at us. Dauntless is a great word as well. Very brave. Great write

Honestly when I read the title I thought it was about the movie "Star Wars" but then after reading it I realized its more about the galaxy and their stunning atmosphere. Overall I liked the description and in just a short verse you made it vivid.

Just one thing with this line:

their fall is bright and heroic.
I'm one of they

^^Did you mean I'm one of them...?

Wow what a truly beautiful masterpiece you have written here.

Like others I thought oh star wars as in the movie so I must admit I reluctant to open it but as you are a good writer I did anyway and I'm so glad that I did.
Your imagery is sufficient.

I think there is a typo on this line 'I'm one of they..' If think they should be them.

Take care, Em