I like this poem full of hope, of how the world can and should be.
Beautiful.

I like this. Piece. It's full of what ifs but if you close your eyes and dream for a moment it can be reality.

Typo in stanza 1 line 4 I think 'lie' should be 'life' and stanza 3 line 3 'th' should,be 'the'

Em

I like this. Piece. It's full of what ifs but if you close your eyes and dream for a moment it can be reality.

Typo in stanza 1 line 4 I think 'lie' should be 'life' and stanza 3 line 3 'th' should,be 'the'

Em

I like this. Piece. It's full of what ifs but if you close your eyes and dream for a moment it can be reality.

Typo in stanza 1 line 4 I think 'lie' should be 'life' and stanza 3 line 3 'th' should,be 'the'

Em