I like the flow and this one poem makes me like to read poetry from you because you made this poem make sense to me and that's a good thing
From this day a new era begun.
The time of gods, right and wrong.
One of Oceans, one of storms.
One of the underworld, whom all foul belongs.
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I like how this stanza refers to "Persidion, Zeus, and Hades" but you don't mention them you mention their kingdoms which is great because you have to use your brain to understand it nice job 5/5