Comments : Colours fighting (one word poem)

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I'm really glad you wrote this. Because there are so many ways you could go! Of course I have to say that I believe that the title makes the whole poem. "Colors fighting" Makes you think about a lot of things even before you read the whole poem. With a title you want to draw the readers eye. And you did that here. Kaleidoscopic is such a great word to use. Because it makes you think of so many things. Rainbows come to mind. It could also mean an artist painting. But as I said this works well as a poem with the title and combined. EExcellent poem I feel. No mistakes at all!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Darren

      This is a great comment for such a small poem.

      thanks