I really like this. It's simple and the flow is great, read aloud it sounds even better. The part that really stands out to me is the last stanza, praying for forgiveness? Always a great thing, and a really nice addition to this poem. Great job.

This is a beautiful poem. Went hand in hand with someone said at church this morning, and I was immediately drawn to it. Forgiveness is an act of accepting; you accept what Jesus has done for you, you accept His forgiveness, and it is done. :) Amen!