Comments : Mad (double acrostic, triple senryu palindrone)

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Love this poem again. To me it seems like there are three different forms of being bad here but they all flow into one story. The "a" in the second stanza to flow with the capital letters. I feel this one could be talking about a wide array of things this time. Though I am not sure what. My first thought was war over religion or just religion in general and how some people will get into heaven and some people won't. So they discard the "unwanted". I do like sexism here. I think it can definitely play both ways. And death is a good way to wrap the poem up. Because I believe that is the plot of the story. Because death and religion do go hand in hand. Great write

    • 9 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks again, I will edit as suggested