Comments : One Size Coffin

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Interesting beat, may I ask what meter are you using?

    • 9 years ago

      by William Mae

      I really know almost nothing about the technical terms for poetry. I never considered the meter of poetry when i write it. I did look it up and if i understand it mine here would be a mixed meter, a 4/3 beat, a tetrameter followed with a trimeter. And even this may be wrong, lol, because I really dont know much about it. Thanks for reading my poem though.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Whether rich or poor, educated or not death does not choose who or what. Death's bed is the same for all.

    Good to see you writing once again :)

  • 9 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    A poetic reminder of the inevitable, how we race around in life, pursuing our dreams, not knowing when our turn will be. Similar thoughts I feel when passing a graveyard, were only a stone and epitaph indicate there was once a person who had their own dreams and accomplishments. Nice write.