Comments : I'm Not Strong

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Holy MOLY!

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I can nominate ;-p love this!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thankfully!!! Truthfully, I couldn't be happier with that. I've had such a bad writer's block lately, and this piece I'm very happy with. It gives me the same feeling that I got when I wrote Insect, or A Spotlight and Window Casing, or even A Final Confession. This is hopefully my comeback out of the block, and this is a poem that I really, really want as many people as possible to see.

      Thank you so much for both reading and nominating it, Andrea!!! <3 <3 <3

  • 9 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    This is so strong...

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Kakera you've outdone yourself once again, such beautiful prose,I love the line"if I were truly strong I would have the power to stay there with them-to bleed in their place"so beautiful, the entire poem rings with the tune of one such as the lion in the wizard of Oz, believing oneself to be a coward, but actually being the bravest when it comes down to the nitty gritty of it all, because if you think about it,a coward wouldn't even think of bleeding in someone elses place! :-) magnificent piece :-)

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Kakera had me in tears this week. This poem was intoxicating and sad. I was drowning and drunk in sadness with this poem!

    Fear of merging into life.. fear of letting go mixed with insecurities is my brief synopsis of this piece. It's one I related to completely... truly touching!