Comments : Attitude facing challenges

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A short write filled with truth. Whatever challenges
    come our way, its indeed an opportunity to change.
    No matter the pain or the hardship, it teaches us
    life's lesson.

    As for the poem itself, I liked it as it is but felt that
    the last two words, (I try) in the final line was not
    needed as it disrupts the flow. But when I re-read
    it, feel that "I try" speaks about how the writer herself
    is trying to follow this rule of life.

    Eventually, we pay for our actions whether good or bad.
    All in all a good write/read.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Sorry for the delay!

    Uhmm the addiction is good though I feel it may need better words to connect it.

    I'll be back. I have to think about it. I may offer a suggestion.

    • 9 years ago

      by alka mendiratta

      Great :)
      Will wait for your suggestions Lucero !!!

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Thank you Lucero.
    Made the changes .It does sound smooth now.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger, I guess - you're right: if we weather a storm we can come out changed for the better hopefully!