Comments : Grades Over Life (Day 4)

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Oh hun, reading this killed me just a little bit more. Wonderfully penend though I think it could be reformatted. Nicely written

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    So true.
    Parents are just bothered about grades and nothing else.( well I guess you are addressing your parents here).

    I think you should add 'they' in the last line of your poem.
    "I'm dying
    and they just don't care."

    I love how you describe grades as "a letter on a piece of paper."

    Well done.Being a student my self, I can relate so much to you.

    Keep writing.