Comments : ROOTS:

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Scott,

    This is beautiful. You captured the inspirational message of family tree with pure elegance!

    Love this!!!

    Your flow and rhyme pattern is perfect!

    • 9 years ago

      by Scott Cole

      Thank you Maple Tree from great comments come great works. Glad you enjoyed it as much as I did writing it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Very happy to have you on this site Scott, beautiful poetry you are sharing with us!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is an amazing poem! Very deep and very thoughtful.
    this is the circle of life, and so is the ultimate truth of living.

    It is indeed all about roots, and it is from roots that everything living thing come from. The influence of our families and what influence we also leave behind is all connected.

    From dirt or skin < that was brilliant,
    looks are deceitful, < another amazing line.

    You have great thoughts!