You are an incredibly well talented writer, I am really taken by this piece of art, but such comment will not give it just, and at the moment I cannot type down all the thoughts this poem has give me, it's going to my favorites and Im coming back to this tomorrow.

Just incredible !

Alright back to this, I found this one of the most secret hiding poems lately, it has a lot into it other than what the words reveal.

The word choice seemed to be smart and intended,
I was simply not blinking the 1st time I read it, I wanted to continue and reach the end, and I was even more curious to know about the 2nd part, and I am waiting for it, for real.

Your repetition of I am this burning, church, I am this broken church was heart breaking, touching, and thought provoking, I was completely inspired with endless thoughts on it.

I cant express in words how much I love this poem. I want it to be mine!

"On my knees I'm praying,
your hearing what I'm saying.
Dear Father please forgive me,
for a sin that wont outlive me,
I am this broken church."

"From the dirt smear that smirch
Everything done, no research
All this hurt near your perch
Am I this burning church?

^ like really ? jnfjkdscxhfdjkhfdjkfnh"

I am new to your writings, so I am not sure what kind of perception I have about your style, but if this is how you write every poem, then you do really deserve to be on spot light.

PS this can be a successful song, as successful as Hallelujah.