This rolled out swimmingly!

Luce I wonder if your poems come from experience don't you get tired of being tossed around and used and still being so polite and caring and forgiving and loving and kind just because you don't want them to hurt because you know what it feels like to hurt and still they never understand that they are hurting you and what a favour you are doing them by not telling them what they are actually doing???

Love this!
Important messages don't scream from billboards or get 30 second spots at the super bowl. They bob in the surf to be discovered by the lucky few. Your message in a bottle is as heartfelt a one could hope for.

A meaningful message left in a bottle seems to come to a hand when its most needed. Brilliant!!

Double post!

Beautiful message conveyed trapped in the bottle swaying on ebbs of life.......

"Be just, be Kind

Live life with dignity,
And love,

Oh love,
live life"
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If I get such a message frome a floating bottle it would make my day!! I looove it, it is meaningful and in some way comforting :)

Judging Comment

This is a metaphoric gem this week! I adore everlastings personality and it shines within her writing...

The feeling of being in motion, just waiting and moving in life, to live, love and be loved. This poem is unique, creative and stands out this week, just beautiful!