Nominated. I love this poem, because it speaks to a lot of people and it takes your mind on a trip. Because you get the reader thinking about who this person is, and how they can help you out. I see this as two ways. One, it could be about god and how he is always with you inside and out, and always trying to pick you up when you have fallen. Or two: someone that you loved dearly that is in your heart. and how they give you the strength to carry on. 5/5

Good

I like the fact that you have used the word "he" rather then telling who it is. It can be anyone, from God to a normal person. who ever it maybe, this poem instills hope and build faith. Liked the read.

trying t make ends meet,

^^There is a o missing in this line, trying to...

Thank you for writing this, it is very uplifting to read this right now, and has a beautiful, comforting little message to it.

Nice work.

Judging Comment:

A darling poem that varies in meaning to every poet, but still captures the heart in one way or another. Personally speaking I think it's about bills but it could be something else entirely. I'm blunt when it comes to my poetry and I loved reading this since it has a mystery yet it's blunt and raw. Very nicely done.

- Moria Bella Bair -