Awesome...just awesome

Lucero ,an awesome write !!!!
Hope all is well with you .

So beautiful

Ahhh the beauty, the imagery is so alive in this write! I can picture you all the way till the end as well as hear your thoughts. Writing opens a gate way where we can fly to the end of the earth!

Creative juices are indeed intoxicating! The poem fully engages the reader in the experience of imagination and expression. Your thorough immersion is well described ("I taste the memories / the sweetness, the bitterness that life has given me, / ... even what life has not given me... I savor each and every taste, / ... to the last drop.") This abandonment into your work is what I think true art requires. (Contest Comment)

Judging Comment

It's such a pity that as a judge, I am stuck at which poem to make the highest and which the lowest since they are so perfect every single poem! Makes me want to cry because it was so hard. The imagery was stunning and it took you on a journey of seeing and tasting everything. Very inspiring and unique that's for sure! The ending was very nice to read this one is going to my favorite poems list!

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