What a stunningly penned little story - and one full of ultimate hope. "......better for them to go through the wrong so they can finally get to the right." Words ringing in truth and wisdom.

Hello Moria.

This is search a beautiful piece, very encouraging and upstanding.
I like the tale, and the whole idea of women and broken hearts.

The first line, i guess it should read, "Long ago there used to be....."

If that's right,
I like the use of words, the phrases used are gentle and amazing.

Good work. Keep up the spirit.