Poetic perfection. I love the 'old world' feel to this created not only by your choice of wording but also by the rhyme and flow. This one is definitely going in my favourites. :)

Have to agree with Cassie on this one...beautiful, this has such a wonderful flow and I really, REALLY, like how the words you use are soft and hard...

"Tender hatred warms your smile,
when nature births something vile."

^^^^^ I adore this, like i say soft and hard and the outcome is wonderful!!!

Made me jealous of this one Hazel. Two stunning pieces in a row.