Comments : CupiD (acrostic)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Absolutely true, Michael - pinpoint precision is needed.
    Another great little acrostic from you,
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Just having a sneaky look whilst at work, I really like this little piece Michael....I'm particularly fond of your Acrostic poems, they always flow so well and whilst reading them we as readers tend to forget that they're a formed piece atall.

    As always wonderful writing!

  • 8 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Aww, poor cupid. He has too much tension accumulating on his bow...

    but it is true, he needs the pinpoint precision.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    If love has to be true and become a dream come true then cupid has to work real hard and careful! But at the rate things are going he shoots at the wrong people and places!!

    Well done with the acrostic and it reads so well too :)