Comments : Sleep, what's that?

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ken, this is brilliant - it made me laugh and nod knowingly all at once! "your bladder sings its old familiar song" - excellent. A really good write and unique to, delivered in your usual unique way!
    All the best
    Ben
    ps. nominated

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    A reality filled poem. Now how many of us toss
    and turn just to find sleep and when we do hope
    that it gives us a good six hour sleep without going
    to the toilet! This one was penned with a light
    heart-ed tone mixed with funny episodes and facts
    of life. Enjoyed the read!

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Meena! Check out my new poem called; The rising tide.
    Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Loooooooove it! It's a bit funny too, and I can sing it! Had so much fun reading it.
    Way to go!

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Zahra, glad you enjoyed it and sang it too!
    Most songs today are poetry that is sung, most of us can relate to lack of sleep so I just put real life experience to rhyme.

    Glad your back, missed you.
    Ken