Comments : Rustic Hues

  • 8 years ago

    by J Nair

    Hi ,
    Lovely Poem,
    A picture of rugged outdoors and the earthy life style is beautifuly captured in this write.
    My favourite verse is;

    Little hands that count the sparks,
    And leaping flames that leave the hearth.
    The music of glass the rhythm of breath
    Of mothers hands as they roll out dough.
    A cup of brew a morsel of bread,
    With quizzing wide eyes ,seeking answers.
    Of stories lost in dreams at bed .

    I could picture it vividly in my minds eye.

    Thank you

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Welcome to the site and a wonderfully written piece here. Well done and keep writing,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Greeter

    Interesting questions at the end:

    If Heaven's is what your soul do seek, Then, Paradise is here, why look beyond!?

    Food for thought, Welcome to Poems and Quotes.