Comments : Orphism

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely poem, Michael, with a wisdom inherent that we would all do well to heed.
    All the very best
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    Your poetry always gives readers something to think about. This one is no exception.
    Excellent job
    Take care Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Michael,

    A wailing wall just about sums it up. Leave the wailing to the objects that won't answer back. Maybe then us brothers can get along and like the evolved species that we are supposed to be.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    Michael has written an impressive poem this week, I was eager to read this poem because he has a favorable way of making rhyme flow.. He nailed this piece with tasteful and lovely rhyme.

    His title ties the poem in to a tee..

    Religious beliefs are always such a hot topic throughout the world these days and I admire his banding together of all and one. Political poems can often become tedious, but not this poem and it actually gave me goosebumps. Very powerful!!