Comments : Shiny Little Things

  • 8 years ago

    by Greeter

    Now this one made me feel confused lol

    I enjoyed the read though. The poem has a rhythm. As I was reading the poem I felt like I was being squashed by a shoe then that I avoided it but then I dk...

    It must have been like the ending I didn't know where or when I am... Pun not intended.

    Keep writing