Comments : Is writing enough?

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    You write like a goddess! You always have and each time I read one of your new poems, I melt!

    "I feel like a squid for blinding you."

    LOVE this line!!

    Very detailed with a wonderful metaphor and just oooo wonderful in my eyes!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    With words like this please never "stop polluting the oceans"-this was beautiful! So elegant-lovely-take care-Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe

    Lovely peace, liked the flow and metaphors used.

    I really liked the line, 'how i wish to wear my skeleton outside, like an amour of warning signs,' Wow!! beautiful.

    As much as i like writing i really enjoy how people decipher their thoughts and feelings and put them into beautiful words like these.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is written with great elegance and absolutely beautiful. Add to my favorite. Take care