Hello Michael

I was going to break this down stanza by stanza but......I don't think I will now, lol!
This is a wonderful piece of poetry - original and intoxicating in its detail. I have read it four times now and pick something new from it I like each time. It was certainly a worthy second place from you in that mammoth competition a few weeks back and I have been waiting for you to post it.

You never cease to amaze me with your innovative ideas and creativity - you are a true inspiration to me and many others on this site, I know. nominated.

Take care,
Ben

Michael, Wow! This is an incredible poem! Such a sad story but enthralling all the way through. I'm just blown way- Brenda

Michael this is very emotional and written well. This is incredible and it's vey original.which I like.
The talent you have is outstanding.

Em