Michael, this is a sad tale of truth after bitter truth. I wish it wasn't like this but it is.
Amazing write.
Em

Definitely a rant type poem! Maybe you should include it in your title?

There is so much going on in this poem and..sadly, it's all true. This world is a horrible place to live in right now and you've nailed how most of us feel living it daily...

Wall Mark prices, rotting meals.

^^^

Should it be Wal.mart? I don't know for sure?

This is a powerful piece and superbly crafted to bring out the message clearly. Well done

Michael, so true. We are destroying ourselves and doing nothing to stop it. You have really nailed it-

I love the way you use words to express yourself. This poem is simply beautiful.

Another astonishing work..good job.

This piece is on point. We are destroying ourselves. Thanks for sharing.

Hello Sir,

Praise the Lord

This write of yours is delivering out the images of darkness. The vital and the most interesting stuff I've found here is your rhyming skills. Normally we don't see rhyming stuff from your mind, but this writing is tremendous.

As you have expressed the dark side of the planet Earth makes me fall into the visions of the seven years of tribulation period (The last chapter of the bible). It doesn't not figuring forth only the destruction of the Earth but also giving an information that we humans are only responsible for all the stuffs written above.

So, leaving this all behind, let's make a new earth with the grace of the almighty Lord Jesus Christ.